Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Haiku

Flew Away

Bliss had promised her

                    Contentment he delivered

                        Away the dream flew!




                       © Demetrios Trifiatis
                          09 November 2015

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A. Juman November 9, 2015 at 7:26 PM Perfection--Demetrios perfecto you got it my friend Demetrios Trifiatis November 10, 2015 at 8:20 AM Welcome my new friend! Hope you be happy with us here and to enjoy the company of our many good poets, women and men! Thank you for your warm comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2015 at 2:57 PM - Lovely, but sad when dreams are flying away ..... always have dreams - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis November 10, 2015 at 8:18 AM Yes, I agree, dear one! We have to be careful and try to keep our dreams as close as we can to our possibilities. Thank you , dear Anne-Lise for your precious visit and comment!

Theresa Cw November 9, 2015 at 2:12 AM I also agree with what Kim has said below, Demetrios. Have a fantastic week ahead. hugs Theresa Demetrios Trifiatis November 10, 2015 at 8:15 AM Delighted to see you again my good friend, Theresa. Thank you so much for your visit and comment!

Kp Nunez November 9, 2015 at 2:08 AM Bliss in a romantic haiku. Have a great week, sire. Kim Demetrios Trifiatis November 10, 2015 at 8:14 AM Kim, my dearest, thank you very much for your beautiful visit and comment! Have a great week you too!