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Fleeting Things

Fleeting things are like leaves in autumn Spiraling in the uncertain breeze Then to be gathered and burnt © Brenda V Northeast Jan. 5th 2012

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2012 2:30:00 AM

Thank you Brenda for sweet comment on my new poem. And I like this new one from you,thank you. oxox love Anne-Lise

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/6/2012 3:00:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise, : ) Brenda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2012 10:08:00 PM

I really like this one. short free verse like this are a joy!!

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/6/2012 3:01:00 AM

Thank you Andrea appreciate your comment, Brenda : )

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/5/2012 3:11:00 PM

Brenda, I enjoyed reading your free verse today, a wonderful write you have penned. Welcome to poetry soup~Caryl

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/6/2012 3:02:00 AM

Thank you for the welcome I am enjoying this site- love and blessings, Brenda : )

Dino Spahillari

Date: 1/5/2012 8:09:00 AM

Interesting...What northeast mean,like Boston?I live there...thanks for reading my works lately...Dino

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/5/2012 8:23:00 AM

Thank you Dino- Northeast is my surname- how it originally came to be not sure- I just know it originated in Sussex UK, Cheers, Bren

John Castro

Date: 1/4/2012 8:35:00 PM

hahahahahaa lol i like this heads up 7 up i feel the same way +)

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/5/2012 8:24:00 AM

Thank you John, Brenda : )

M.I.A .

Date: 1/4/2012 8:17:00 PM

have to say the same like Russell, Wow Wow Wow! profound piece Brenda. Thanks for stopping by n your kind comments

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/4/2012 8:26:00 PM

Thank you so Mia, I am really enjoying the interaction with other poets, it is wonderful to be able to touch in words, Bren

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/4/2012 8:09:00 PM

Wow, what a great write! "...Then to be gathered and burnt", such an ending, says so much all in one line! Those leaves are so fleeting, not much left in their life, so soon to be destroyed! I loved this poem! Awesome Work!!

Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/4/2012 8:25:00 PM

Gee I am humbled, thank you so much Russell- you have such a lovely spirit, Bren