Fleeting Sand

Beads
Of sand
Twirl around
In slow motion,
Like white lace draping my feet in cool waves.

Powdered coastline echoed of our laughter
But how fleeting
Was June’s quest-
Time's play
Gone.



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Double Tetractys 2 Contest of Eve Roper
Visual 2     9/10/2020

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Jeanne Mcgee

September 18, 2020 at 5:34 AM

Lovely vision Nette. Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus

September 18, 2020 at 1:10 AM

An excellent take on the sand visual, Nette. Those grains of sand have truly inspired you, my friend. Congratulations on placing first. Hugs // paul

Carol Mitra

September 17, 2020 at 9:54 PM

This is such an amazing write...and brings back memories of what we do with our feet playing with sand.....Refreshing Nette and Congratulations.

Sam Kauffman

September 17, 2020 at 9:18 PM

So many beautiful images with movement like shifting sand, Nette. Very special. Many congratulatinso on your top podium win. I love the end line especially since I'm having a hard time letting go of summer this year! Blessings my friend.