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Was in a wheel chair but boy could she spin Me up in the air with mischievous grin? Front tooth missing so much better to whiz At points of elation blew me a kiss?? Lush lips adorned with a contagious smile? Worries suspended I flew for a while? Her hands and my bounce a beautiful match She clapped before each valuable catch Were one in advent and when letting go? Please just another titillating throw? Final adventure before you retire Make me stay up there I'm such a live wire?? Grandma has passed now looks on from above? Be happy up there I'm sending you love?? 05th July 2019?

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Date: 7/16/2019 9:07:00 PM
what a wonderful poem, I through my grandson up and it just tickles him to no end and wants more, great write.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/17/2019 1:54:00 AM
Thank you Eve. Kind wishes. I am still waiting for grandchildren ...Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 7/10/2019 9:44:00 AM
I miss my grandmothers , too. They both mad it to 96!! Stimulating verse! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/11/2019 2:35:00 AM
Thank you Mathew. I appreciate that. Kind wishes and blessings too, Kai
Date: 7/9/2019 3:37:00 AM
I can see her little smile with her tooth missing, and I know she is throwing you up in the air as high as she can while you sleep. I hope you can feel this too. Do you ever wake up after a hard whoosh where your soul returns too hard and slams into your chest? This is when she is throwing you. Enjoyed this one!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/9/2019 5:16:00 AM
One of my grandmother died in a labour camp way before I was born. The other one I remember fondly, but she too early. But she was kind to me and taught me a lot. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 7/5/2019 4:37:00 AM
This is a very unique poem, intriguing to say the least. I always thought you were a brainer. Your poetry always did challenge me. Have a wonderful day dear heart. xo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/5/2019 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Pixie. All th best wishes to you too, Kai

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