Fleeting Love

A love that is written in the sand will be erased by a rising tide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Richard. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 8:31 AM
So true Richard, it can erase a day, or a lifetime of love. Fine Monoku, and may I say thank you for your always kind words. Have a lovely weekend :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 8:58 PM
this is just wonderful, saying so much in so few words. A belated congrats to you, Richard, on your HM
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Congrats Richard on your HM in the contest ..with this rare beauty write ..enjoy with luv..
White Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 8:58 PM
Wow!
Long Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 7:48 AM
congrats on your win with this great piece. cory
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 5:16 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Richard. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 6:29 PM
Very thoughtful expressions, Richard
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