Poetry need not be uplifting in every instance; there are weighty themes as well. Yet, it should certainly leave an imprint of beauty on the reader's soul... Words should fit together harmoniously.
a trout in shallow water in the fading light... carefully you slide your hand beneath its belly and with the other softly stroke … its fin for a moment it yields to you only to slip away into the silver waves of confined time...
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.