CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

Flee To Nature

At times, I must flee routine and city work-life,
leave behind my daily schedules and office strife
to linger unrushed where nature remains untouched,
its splendid beauty neither man-brushed nor time-hushed.

When I cannot escape to nature’s lilting scenes
my natural faith aches and wilts in crooked leans.

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Jennifer Proxenos April 19, 2019 at 10:27 AM Congratulations dear friend, I should have realized this was a win, but just noticed it was - truly deserved!

Jennifer Proxenos April 19, 2019 at 10:26 AM I love and relate to this poem completely CayCay! We need to escape to Natures secure lap, and besides, being in the wild, the mountains or by the sea, inspires me! A certain fave. for me. Poetry hugs, Jenny.

Line Gauthier April 13, 2019 at 11:58 AM Loely, CayCay. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2019 at 11:05 AM awesome to see you with a win from Brian (I came in with another HM as shown by his blog). Congrats my sweet friend! See you Again in a few days.

Paul Marc April 13, 2019 at 10:06 AM Your poem has encouraged me to find some untouched nature ~ congratulations on your win, CayCay :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 6, 2019 at 12:53 PM You have expressed beautifully the inspiration nature bestows CayCay. This is a top winner for me. Congratulations on your deserving win!xxoo : )

Eve Roper April 5, 2019 at 3:43 PM Back with a big congratulations . Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2019 at 6:09 PM hey, CONGRATS!!!

Constance La France April 3, 2019 at 12:39 PM CayCay, congratulations on your second place win in my contest with these beautifully penned rhyming lines ~

Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2019 at 4:20 AM - A lovely poem CayCay, congratulations on a great 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jannie Breedt April 3, 2019 at 12:09 AM Hello Tiger, Thank you for your email. Hope you are warm and happy. Love your nature ,in poem and your spirit. Love you and all my friends on Soup. Gotta go and make money now.

Connie Marcum Wong April 2, 2019 at 5:16 PM Oh this is really lovely CayCay! I think Constance will think so too. It was wonderful to hear from you and see your muse has returned. Beautiful! Hugs, Connie xxoo : )

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2019 at 3:43 PM you took the challenge to a wonderfully contemplative level, Caycay. I especially loved the man-brushed/ time-hushed line. Very cleverly written. Guess what? I am DONE here. I was saving YOu for last! now I can go home and see netflix. whoo hoo!! Unless hubbie has beat me home!!

Vijay Pandit April 2, 2019 at 3:32 PM I enjoyed reading about this escape to your place ..your sanctuary. Most can relate to the sentiments you express CayCay..a desire to be in nature..somewhere un-rushed and untouched..as you say. Well written, CayCay.

Eve Roper April 2, 2019 at 2:33 PM Very well said, my friend ,CayCay, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Robert L. Hinshaw April 2, 2019 at 10:59 AM A beautiful verse CayCay from your very versatile pen! My kind of poetry. Glad you enjoyed the Mountain Echo write and thanks for your kind comment - BoB