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Fledgling Crash Lands On Its Maiden Flight

Delight... First flight From nest Tries best Hits tree Dear me! Bent beak Loud squeak Throbbin Robin 11-29-17

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John Michaels
Date: 12/2/2017 9:35:00 AM
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Excellent stuff, Jan! Most amusing! All the best, John.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:52:00 PM
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Thanks so much John:-) hugs jan xx
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/1/2017 5:46:00 AM
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I've seen this actually happen, you described it well Hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:51:00 PM
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aww bless:-( hugs jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2017 1:27:00 PM
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Footles with an "L" sign attached, but definitely not referring to the author:) Now I'm feeling sorry for little robin! Incidentally, I found an injured robin in my garden this morning...died in my hands:( Hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:50:00 PM
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aww sorry you can relate to this for real:-( hugs jan xx
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 11/30/2017 11:18:00 AM
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Very funny - love it, Jan!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:50:00 PM
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Thanks Agnes:-) hugs jan xx
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/30/2017 5:41:00 AM
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This is really good...A lesson for all...in a little story...All the best Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:50:00 PM
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Thanks Arturo:-) hugs jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2017 4:16:00 AM
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- A hard school to learn to fly :) - Love it, Jan :) - Best wishes for a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:48:00 PM
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Yes its sad to see when they are not quite ready:-( hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/29/2017 8:25:00 PM
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So funny especially that last verse!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:46:00 PM
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Cheers Arthur:-) hugs jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/29/2017 7:57:00 PM
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oh Jan, that one just got funnier and funnier. The last few were awesome!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:46:00 PM
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I never know where my muse will take me lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/29/2017 7:41:00 PM
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nice one, Jan, hugs eve
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:45:00 PM
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Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 11/29/2017 3:36:00 PM
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Poor birdie! Very cute. As usual.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 5:01:00 PM
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cheers ma dear and your avatar is so cute too:-0 hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 11/29/2017 2:03:00 PM
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Very well done Jan...soupmail
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 5:00:00 PM
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Sorry for the delay, have just replied:-) hugs jan xx
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Anna Hopper
Date: 11/29/2017 2:03:00 PM
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I Have the perfect picture have the perfect picture in my head! Excellent!
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 5:00:00 PM
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Thanks so much Anna:-) hugs jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/29/2017 1:08:00 PM
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Ha, ha, ha. NIce one Jan. Mistake/head ache...wings/sting...next flight/get right. // Barry
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 4:59:00 PM
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lovely footles Barry!:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/29/2017 12:30:00 PM
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I enjoy your footless, Jan, nicely done. John
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 4:59:00 PM
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Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/29/2017 12:16:00 PM
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Adorable, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 12:28:00 PM
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Thanks Line I was inspired by a I'd in the garden not a fledgling but it needed a refresher on flying poor thing:-) hugs Jan xx

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