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Fledgling Crash Lands On Its Maiden Flight

Delight... First flight From nest Tries best Hits tree Dear me! Bent beak Loud squeak Throbbin Robin 11-29-17

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John Michaels

Date: 12/2/2017 9:35:00 AM

Excellent stuff, Jan! Most amusing! All the best, John.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:52:00 PM

Thanks so much John:-) hugs jan xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 12/1/2017 5:46:00 AM

I've seen this actually happen, you described it well Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:51:00 PM

aww bless:-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/30/2017 1:27:00 PM

Footles with an "L" sign attached, but definitely not referring to the author:) Now I'm feeling sorry for little robin! Incidentally, I found an injured robin in my garden this morning...died in my hands:( Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:50:00 PM

aww sorry you can relate to this for real:-( hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/30/2017 11:18:00 AM

Very funny - love it, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/30/2017 5:41:00 AM

This is really good...A lesson for all...in a little story...All the best Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Arturo:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2017 4:16:00 AM

- A hard school to learn to fly :) - Love it, Jan :) - Best wishes for a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:48:00 PM

Yes its sad to see when they are not quite ready:-( hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/29/2017 8:25:00 PM

So funny especially that last verse!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:46:00 PM

Cheers Arthur:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2017 7:57:00 PM

oh Jan, that one just got funnier and funnier. The last few were awesome!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:46:00 PM

I never know where my muse will take me lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/29/2017 7:41:00 PM

nice one, Jan, hugs eve

Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2017 4:45:00 PM

Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 11/29/2017 3:36:00 PM

Poor birdie! Very cute. As usual.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 5:01:00 PM

cheers ma dear and your avatar is so cute too:-0 hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2017 2:03:00 PM

Very well done Jan...soupmail

Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 5:00:00 PM

Sorry for the delay, have just replied:-) hugs jan xx

Anna Hopper

Date: 11/29/2017 2:03:00 PM

I Have the perfect picture have the perfect picture in my head! Excellent!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 5:00:00 PM

Thanks so much Anna:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/29/2017 1:08:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha. NIce one Jan. Mistake/head ache...wings/sting...next flight/get right. // Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 4:59:00 PM

lovely footles Barry!:-) hugs Jan xx

John Gondolf

Date: 11/29/2017 12:30:00 PM

I enjoy your footless, Jan, nicely done. John

Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 4:59:00 PM

Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/29/2017 12:16:00 PM

Adorable, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/29/2017 12:28:00 PM

Thanks Line I was inspired by a I'd in the garden not a fledgling but it needed a refresher on flying poor thing:-) hugs Jan xx