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Fleas On Noah's Ark

Two fleas are jumpig
Onboard of Noah’s Ark
For warm nest looking.

Two fleas are dreaming
Onboard of Noah’s Ark
A warm nest enjoying.

Two fleas are arriving
Onboard of Noah’s Ark
At Ararat’s mountain.

Their trip is ending
Onboard of Noah’s Ark
And starts a novel jumping

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Mario De Paz

August 2, 2013 at 11:11 AM

This compostion is completely wrong, It is not a correct Haiku as far syllables counter. I apologize to have presented it to a contest where it correctly did not receive attention, The basic idea is cute, but not completely developed, It might continue as "billions of fleas around the world are jumping....", but the all form should be revised....