Flaws

Noise chattering among us.. Whether outside Whether inside.. It matters not.. Thoughts provoke frequently.. Undesirable.. Desirable.. Head is filled with noise pollution.. Days and nights.. Moment to moment.. Our flaws a constant reminder.. If only.. Why.. Thoughts haunting us.. Silence awaits.. Golden.. Pure.. Smooth and still.. Fragments of noise dissolved.. Peace had risen.. In stillness of the moment.. Flaws accepted.. As one loves thyself.. Your greatest flaws become your own perfection..

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/25/2019 10:21:00 AM

Robertina, There is a perfection in this poem 'Flaws' that resonates with me, one of the most flawed. -Richard

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2019 2:19:00 PM

Your poem speaks to universal truths my friend..enjoyed reading the words of wisdom, Robertina.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/5/2019 4:43:00 PM

Good one...your last three lines especially are especially deep. Do you know that! A great poem. Panagiota

Robertina B.
Date: 11/6/2019 5:59:00 PM

I appreciate your lovely words and visit, Panagiota.. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2019 2:46:00 PM

- Robertina, wise and great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robertina B.
Date: 11/6/2019 5:57:00 PM

Thank you for visiting with yoyr kindness, Sunshine.. Really appreciate it! Blessings..