Robertina B. Poet Free verse

Flaws

Noise chattering among us..
Whether outside
Whether inside..
It matters not..

Thoughts provoke frequently..
Undesirable..
Desirable..
Head is filled with noise pollution..
Days and nights..
Moment to moment..

Our flaws a constant reminder..
If only..
Why..
Thoughts haunting us..

Silence awaits..
Golden..
Pure..
Smooth and still..
Fragments of noise dissolved..
Peace had risen..

In stillness of the moment..

Flaws accepted..
As one loves thyself..
Your greatest flaws become your own perfection..

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Quoth Theraven November 25, 2019 at 10:21 AM Robertina, There is a perfection in this poem 'Flaws' that resonates with me, one of the most flawed. -Richard

Vijay Pandit November 7, 2019 at 2:19 PM Your poem speaks to universal truths my friend..enjoyed reading the words of wisdom, Robertina.

Panagiota Romios November 5, 2019 at 4:43 PM Good one...your last three lines especially are especially deep. Do you know that! A great poem. Panagiota Robertina B. November 6, 2019 at 5:59 PM I appreciate your lovely words and visit, Panagiota.. Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2019 at 2:46 PM - Robertina, wise and great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Robertina B. November 6, 2019 at 5:57 PM Thank you for visiting with yoyr kindness, Sunshine.. Really appreciate it! Blessings..