Flawless Heaven

Waiting underneath the moon's face
Impatient, I want to race.

Where do we go from here?
We have nothing to fear.

What we have is ideal
Perfection is why its real.

Imperfection is being in heaven
Or is it, I pause and question.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 7:06 PM
or maybe imperfectionis why it's real!! because perfection is supposed to be heaven. haha. Anyway, this makes ya stop and think. LUv, Andrea
Pettit Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Good set of couplets with descriptiveness and rhyming.
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 5:19 AM
I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Kristen. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:14 PM
delightful paradoxical expression, kristen...special winning wishes for the contest :) nette
A   Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:05 PM
Nice Kristen, yes that is why it's real,..p.d.
Alcorn Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:05 PM
How powerful, absolutely wonderful! Love, Molly
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