Flawed Vision

You say, my hair is too kinky and my nose is too broad
But I see perfection it’s your vision that’s flawed

Complexion of mahogany , defined too dark by some
But I see pure radiance, kissed by the sun

You say my lips are too full and my hips are too wide
But you can’t see my true beauty until you open your eyes

You say that my flaws depict my inferiority
But rest assured that your chaotic view do not define me

You say that I’m conceited, but I say you lied
It’s just the grace of my walk and the elegance of my stride

You say that I’m egotistical and full of arrogance
What you really see is self-assurance, grace, and confidence

You say I’m attention seeking, too bold, and too proud
But I say uniqueness always stands out in a crowd

You say that I’m vain and I think I’m God’s gift to this earth
But I know my true value 
I fully understand my worth. 


If Helen of Troy possessed the beauty that launch a thousand ships across treacherous seas.

Then I possess the magnificence that brings all men to their knees.



Chiquita Baity


Shadows and Lines revised
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 3:35 AM
who is this kid? why is he tryin' to live rent free up in your beautiful head? Tell him to go on with that mess. Tell him you "do what you pleases, and live where the pools and trees is" N.MinaJ
Effendi Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 8:35 AM
i maintain... !!U R TOO GOOD!!
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 7:01 AM
you are some thing far else, a miracle.
Johnson Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 1:18 AM
love them sassy ladies still, slapped down tromped on maybe till, electroflyn sucks on a dil, (pickle) a stand up gal i need my fill can't blame a man 4 trying.... You sound beautiful babe! Don
Peranteau Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 2:29 PM
You've truly given a countenance which would even give Helen a run for her money ! *smiles* Great write Chiquita ! Later my friend...much love, james
Zzzzz Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 11:51 AM
You sound like a real beauty to me! A good, confidant write with a broad grin on its face! Good one. Robert.
Sivey Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 11:22 AM
I loved this poem, if flows so nicely and tells such a great tale, that of your value in this world!! Keep up the great writes!
Cooke Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 6:27 AM
ooh such spirit, i really like this another top write, well done
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