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FLAWED VESSEL

FLAWED VESSEL ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I am a flawed vessel, cracked in places leaking light and shadow in equal portion
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Wolf Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 7:35 PM
Poor Vessel! ~ Owed 2 Cracking Urn
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 12:24 PM
I like that this is meant to be read as a metaphor with multiple layers of possible meanings ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 6:18 PM
thank you for your insightful comments...yes, multiple layers... :-)
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