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Problem's empty nonsense , Hit of Medium derails ... Jagged , Control out of sounds swift insist shall back hand . Strung statements always up to this or that. Variable constant by the enact verb causing the next effected line . Finished ; An All together Abstract swarm ... breathless for description of technical concept , general to vague dials thy wordvice as perpetual coin scatters... Name that Non-Sequiter . Dazed Arrival , After announcing Day by this Journal's gargle ... A foam at the mouthpiece ... haywire fuse as hand shorts ... Cease.

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