Flaw Rewrite
Problem's empty nonsense ,
Hit of Medium derails ...
Jagged ,
Control out of sounds swift
insist shall back hand .
Strung statements always up to this
or that.
Variable constant by the enact verb
causing the next effected line .
Finished ; An All together Abstract swarm ...
breathless for description of technical concept ,
general to vague dials thy wordvice
as perpetual coin scatters...
Name that Non-Sequiter .
Dazed Arrival ,
After announcing Day by this
Journal's gargle ...
A foam at the mouthpiece ...
haywire fuse as hand shorts ...
Cease.
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