Gray Squirrel Poet Free verse

Flaw

The Flaw
In Your Passion...

Therein: Exploited.

In The Imbalance...

Decided There: A
        "Value."

Promise Not To Tell?
What Is VALUE!?!?

I Remember...
I Promise.

Worth An Entire Life.

And So The Sea Arises:
Ripples In A Pond.

-Gray Squirrel

07-07-2026

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Alison A Smith July 7, 2026 at 8:31 PM You break promises - look shiny things- its OK promises can be broken for shiny things.

Gray Squirrel July 7, 2026 at 11:02 AM I wouldn't want to break a promise, would I? Absolutely not. I NEVER break...