Flashy Bait

You must not hesitate,
If you do you'll be late.
Will you procrastinate?
This ordeal is your fate,
It's not a welcomed date.
Why stare at your plate?
you don't have to negate.
Pick wisely in your mate,
don't trust the flashy bait.


10/16/19
Alexis Y.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

October 29, 2019 at 3:43 PM

Yep. Cool ink wisdom judiciously spilled, Alexis. Meesa like this poem, meesa like it a lot! Mighty fine poetry, my dear friend. Love and hugs forever.

Jennifer Proxenos

October 17, 2019 at 12:06 AM

Imagine If we ever found the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow (impossible) how much more adventurous we would be, but never to the point of having flashy bait following and courting us - I learnt my lesson the hard way, I fell into the trap,marriage lasted 3 years, but from this diaster, I have a wonderful son whom my Dad idolized and so I became wise - Elias is my pillar of strength and a good man, we are married 20 years and we love each others son's as if they are our own. I love this poem , a fav. Hugs Jen.