Jenish Somadas Poet Verse

Flashlight

Ah! Drop your prejudice and hear
I lost my love, fortnights ago
My weeping tears dried-up
Searching for my last name.
With solo flashlight wandering 
Among scattered droplets of war.


First Place in HEXASTICH IT Poetry Contest sponsored by nette onclaud

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John Hamilton June 3, 2020 at 9:09 PM Very touching write Jenish, searching for my last name...nice! Glad this garnered a win for you! Jenish Somadas June 5, 2020 at 12:35 AM Thank you John..Takecare always...

Robertina B. June 3, 2020 at 4:48 AM A belated congratulations on your win, Jenish.. A meaningful and inpirational verse! Really enjoyed reading this wonderful gem, my friend.. Many blessings and stay safe! Jenish Somadas June 5, 2020 at 12:35 AM Thank you Robertina for your delightful words..

Paul Callus May 30, 2020 at 4:22 PM A very striking, sad poem, Jenish. Congratulations on a very merited first place. Regards // paul Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:16 AM Thank you for your kind support Paul..

Jan Allison May 30, 2020 at 12:20 PM An emotional piece, congrats on your win Jenish:-) hugs jan xx Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:15 AM Thank you Jan..

Aditi Mishra May 30, 2020 at 11:07 AM So happy to see you on top Jenish! Congratulations on your splendid win :) Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:15 AM Thank you Aditi.. Happy to have a friend like you sharing the list..

Nette Onclaud May 30, 2020 at 11:01 AM ' writing down the bones', jenish...unique theme for the main word as well...congrats on your top spot in my contest...huggs Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:14 AM Thank you Nette for that fantastic contest.. And thanks a lot for my placement..

David Mohn May 30, 2020 at 10:59 AM Congratulations Jenish...grandly written :) Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:13 AM Thank you David..

Joseph May May 30, 2020 at 10:13 AM A somber verse, well penned Jenish, Congrats on your win Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:12 AM Thank you Joseph..

John Watt May 30, 2020 at 12:51 AM Searching for my last name. Very deep and touching, Jenish. Congratulations on your #1 win ~ John Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:12 AM Thank you John...

Mohan Chutani May 30, 2020 at 12:33 AM A sentimental write. Congrats. Jenish Somadas May 31, 2020 at 2:12 AM Thank you Mohan..

Aditi Mishra May 27, 2020 at 2:13 PM Very emotional write Jenish. Wish you all the best :) Jenish Somadas May 28, 2020 at 1:02 AM Thank you Aditi..

Vijay Pandit May 25, 2020 at 6:58 AM Feels deep, meaningful: My weeping tears dried-up..Searching for my last name. Jenish Somadas May 25, 2020 at 10:37 AM Thank you Vijay for your kind support.. Stay safe...