Flashbacks


f ervid
  l ayered ~
   a rrive unbidden ~
    s napshots of joy
      h earten same ~ 
        b ully reviews
         a dmonish ...
           c austically
             k notting 
              s erenity

deepemotionsimagememorynostalgiaverse

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/29/2025 11:29:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "Flashbacks" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.......

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/29/2025 12:47:00 PM

You are sweetness personified. Thank you ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2025 11:17:00 AM

- Back with congratulations on your winning poem, CayCay :) - hugs

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/29/2025 12:48:00 PM

With joy I hug you back! CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:30:00 AM

I think the form you used was so cool, Caycay. Such a word artist you are. Congrats here.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/29/2025 12:47:00 PM

Thank you, Sweetheart. CayCay

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 3:11:00 AM

Its impressive how you did this take in the form of acrostic , in just few words! Youv delivered one that depicts flashbacks of some memories that come layered , etc in such a creative manner! Serenity can either be enhanced or erased with somw flashbacks. Wishin you good thoughts and memories. Thank you for joining! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/29/2025 12:46:00 PM

I thank you for all the light you radiate on Soup. Sponsoring contests is a generous gift of your time, efforts and consideration - I want to be sure you 'feel' how much you are appreciated by me, and certainly others, by sharing that light and inspiring others as extensively as you do. I extend to you my sincerity for all the above. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2025 10:27:00 PM

Awww you liked the same topic as I did. I think you chose a great creative way to do it and thanks for your sweet comment on my self-praise poem.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/16/2025 7:05:00 PM

This is deep, love love the "serenity" part. ~Soupmail~ :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/16/2025 2:02:00 PM

What a creative "Flashbacks" write. "Good Luck" - Since "Flashbacks" can be good or bad. I will take the good ones. Have a lovely day/weekend writing away..........