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He looks for her in every face he sees In hope of just one more glance Lost in the thought captures his breath Lids closing over in memory a flashback Beats thumping hard exploding in his chest His experience of love - that he once had

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/23/2013 7:36:00 PM
Shaz, You are missed more than you can imagine. Hearts are aching.....and those that aren't aching are broken... Love you dearly.... Jake
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Date: 6/15/2013 2:40:00 PM
In hopes of just one more glance... He decides to take a chance... Asking for one last dance... But off, she decides to prance... :o) Miss you!
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Date: 6/8/2013 9:07:00 AM
Long time no see, hope all is well.
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Date: 4/25/2013 8:33:00 AM
Good morning Shaz
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Date: 4/9/2013 8:30:00 AM
What a treat to read a new poem. I miss our visits. This is really good but then again I expect nothing less from you.
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Date: 4/7/2013 9:39:00 AM
Shaz, I love the sense of loss in this it is powerful, very well done...David
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:57:00 AM
Dramatic and vividly expressed... a good one! Nicely done Shaz... love and big hugs, Jack xox
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