Flashback

Beyond an overcast lazuline sky
a night of waning moon sets ember dark.
As a silent candle of molten hope burns
an ashen landscape in sudden flares up
plummeting a trail from heaven to earth.
Streaks of  photons scattered in brilliance 
lumineers in blaze...
Are they shooting stars?
I had never seen them before.     
Eyes blinded in the frazzle of luster.
Shouldn't I make a wish upon?
But alas! In the blink of an eye it was gone.
For a second, my midnight turned dawn.

Then like your passion, the moment disappeared
fading away in perpetual veil of darkness. 
But a burning star still revolved around you
in an orbit afar, unerased thoughts in track.
A pensive soul in a meteor shower turned ash
forever sheathed in your radiant flashback.






 
Dated 18th August 2019
 
  Sponsor	Nayda Ivette Negron
Contest Name	Shooting Stars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/18/2019 6:37:00 PM
Boy do I hope to see this in First Place Debjani! What you have shared is what poetry is all about. Your unforgettable metaphors that define that beauty lets the reader become a part of your thought process and see the beauty through your eyes. This is beyond Excellent! I love it! xxoo
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 8/29/2019 9:29:00 PM
My goodness... You touched my soul with your beautiful prose of praise. Thanks Connie.. I already feel like winning First Place
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