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unsuspecting oblivion shattered by brazen banished memories May 21, 2019

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 5/22/2019 4:59:00 PM

PS love this! Wonderful write!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/23/2019 6:58:00 AM

Thank you Brenda :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/21/2019 7:29:00 PM

Great poem! Sometimes we wish oblivion and other times we want those memories.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/21/2019 7:32:00 PM

yes The good and bad are stored in our minds :). -ps

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/21/2019 5:45:00 PM

This is what real poetry sounds like. I recognize it, I just feel I do not understand how to "do" it. Bravo! P.S. Wonderful!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/21/2019 5:51:00 PM

Thank you very much! Poetry is a mystery then isn't it, because you "do it" all the time! <3

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/21/2019 2:10:00 PM

Quite a powerful write!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 5/21/2019 4:21:00 PM

Thank you ML :) ~ps