Beata Agustin Poet Verse

Flash Visit

Zooming to my room in a flash

...oblivious of sweet reprimands

my insistent dear guest

then whirled with quest fervor…

now triumphs over treasure found:

story* book** stuck in his wheel chair. 

*Our special child loves Bible stories.
**Joshua 1:8 This book of the law shall not depart out of thy mouth; but thou shalt meditate therein day and night, that thou mayest observe to do according to all that is written therein: for then thou shalt make thy way prosperous, and then thou shalt have good success.

May 27, 2020
5th place, "HEXASTICH IT" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud; judged on 5/29/2020.

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Jan Allison May 30, 2020 at 1:05 PM oh how sweet is this Beata - magical moments between adult and child. many congrats this is my real top winner in so many ways!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud May 30, 2020 at 12:04 PM i like the sneaky feel of this one, beata... warm congrats on your award in my contest...huggs!

Aditi Mishra May 30, 2020 at 11:57 AM Beata congratulations on another win for your divine words. Blessings :)

Jenish Somadas May 30, 2020 at 12:14 AM Great write Beata..Congrats..

Caren Krutsinger May 28, 2020 at 7:14 AM Love the cadence and the fantastical quality of this gem!

Regina Mcintosh May 27, 2020 at 9:02 AM Wonderful write, dear friend. God bless you with many more and Love to you, Gina