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Flash of brightness

A flash of light like a bulb, came into sight Shining outside my window, with a flash The evolving view was bright and beautiful I stood still and watched with happiness The Goldfinch took flight, flapping to my heartbeat Heidi Sands 4/26/25 (C)opyright

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Date: 4/28/2025 2:19:00 AM
This is sublime imagery. I simply loved it.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/28/2025 3:39:00 AM
Thank you. I am happy to hear you loved this one :)
Date: 4/26/2025 12:02:00 PM
- A beautiful bird, Heidi :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2025 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Anne -Lise. Yes, they are so bright. Hugs :)
Date: 4/26/2025 12:01:00 PM
Hello Heidi, oh a flower bloomed. yes that is a lovely site. On a dull day this bulb would brighten the day. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2025 12:01:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Oh that is such a beautiful bird. Those flowers will pop up before you know it. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2025 2:15:00 PM
The yellow goldfinch was bright like a light bulb. My flower bulbs haven't bloomed yet. Thank you Darlene. Hugs :)

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