Flash Flood...

Monsoon season hit last night, It flooded everything in sight; It ripped down fences and uprooted trees, Rolling two ton boulders with sickening ease; Carrying it all on a crest of death, We can feel the roar and hold our breath; The ground is rumbling beneath our feet, We bow our heads and admit defeat; The noise deafening, we cover our ears, It’s bringing about our terror and fears; We stop and watch the destruction flow by, And send a silent prayer up to the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/1/2010 7:32:00 PM
by the way, you talked about the terrible storms in your state. I wrote about storms for today! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/1/2010 7:31:00 PM
Tirzah, I just read one called STeven.It was wonderful. but guess what? I am not able to comment to it there. if you are not getting comments it is probably becuase others can't see a place to comment either. I tried the next poem up.SAME thing. So I came back down here and was able to comment to you. Gosh, I hope it is not doing that weird thing anyplace else to people! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/31/2010 2:43:00 PM
And I like this poem. Can you tell me again where you live? Was this about something you recently witnessed? for some reason I was thinking you lived in the U.s. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/31/2010 2:42:00 PM
Tirzah, I think I am gonna shut down that blog of mine I had going. TOo much animosity there. I liked how you stuck to the subject, dear. I tend to agree with you, that nobody can know the final time. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:13:00 PM
Thankxxx Tirzah for the name of the horse that pulled the coffin of Pres. Kennedy... I did some research but don't think that info was listed but I so appreciate u telling me... am going to list it in my poem now... appreciate my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:30:00 AM
And causes lots of terror too.. great write Tirzah with very descriptive couplets enhancing each scene of destruction so well.. hope it passes soon.. and the horses as well are safe.. good luck with your contest which really closed quickly ... poets luv animals..like u and me...luv...
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Date: 7/28/2010 10:14:00 AM
Terrifying descriptions of nature.Great work!C.C.
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:53:00 AM
That is an ugly force of nature.. Tirzah, enjoyed your couplets and the prayer you send.-P.D.
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