Flash and Go

Their eyes give away their youth Smiles that shoot the room as girls appear. What can they do to impress? Turn on the charm as best they can Girls will test their limits. Silliness is not yet beyond their scope. Speaking in tongues that only youth can understand Girls acknowledge their existence. Perhaps they have a chance... Quickly they move from subject to subject Girls will giggle their secret approval. All the while...protesting. Life is difficult in the Flash and Go. Girls to be attended Youth, the true Aphrodisiac.

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/17/2015 7:22:00 AM

Very clever Dan the ending is great. Nice write.

Dan Cwiak
Date: 9/26/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thanks, Michael. I wrote this one evening while watching some high school students at a fast food restaurant having fun. The guys were flustered and the girls were on the tease. Oh to be that age again...