Flaring Kindness

fondness flared in a flicker of fashion
feathered flight flirtation
and discover the darker depths
to dance in the delight of a dream
abounding aroma of the array
amazing aura in the air
in silent spirituality, serenity
slices of strangulation suspended
 
Written: December 11, 2022

appreciationcharacterfree verse

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Vijay Pandit

December 11, 2022 at 1:53 PM

You aced it with alliteration throughout my friend.

Sally Eslinger

December 11, 2022 at 9:18 AM

Well, now, I’m probably off, not being closer to your usual themes,,,I had to read 3 times & could take a different angle each time. I decided the poem does present a dream holding a paradox( of conflicting ) presentations even, by scent, Ultimately overwhelming or, in dream language, strangling, well, that’s my take. I enjoyed the puzzle & your description of its environs.

Sotto Poet

December 11, 2022 at 9:29 AM

Sally, I am really appreciative of the lovely comments you have shared. Your interpretation hits right at the core of this passage about daydreaming. It's merely a way to get away from the monotony of everyday life and experience a new form of ecstasy and delight.

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