Flaring Kindness

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fondness flared in a flicker of fashion feathered flight flirtation and discover the darker depths to dance in the delight of a dream abounding aroma of the array amazing aura in the air in silent spirituality, serenity slices of strangulation suspended Written: December 11, 2022

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/11/2022 1:53:00 PM

You aced it with alliteration throughout my friend.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/11/2022 9:18:00 AM

Well, now, I’m probably off, not being closer to your usual themes,,,I had to read 3 times & could take a different angle each time. I decided the poem does present a dream holding a paradox( of conflicting ) presentations even, by scent, Ultimately overwhelming or, in dream language, strangling, well, that’s my take. I enjoyed the puzzle & your description of its environs.

Sotto Poet
Date: 12/11/2022 9:29:00 AM

Sally, I am really appreciative of the lovely comments you have shared. Your interpretation hits right at the core of this passage about daydreaming. It's merely a way to get away from the monotony of everyday life and experience a new form of ecstasy and delight.