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Flare To the Heavens

Flare to the heavens
Fired by a goddess’s longbow
Igniting a great passion
She says we should meet
At the hills above her feet
Where billowing clouds reside

Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 27, 2012 at 5:19 AM

a gracious invitation in words so penetrating Russell.. very imaginative lines luv..u excel at the Sedoka my friend.. encouraging all to try utilizing this form for their poetry as u make it look so easy and creative.. once again.. I am quite captivated into another realm luv.. thankxx..

Gwendolen Song

July 27, 2012 at 12:09 AM

Exceptional sedoka, Russell...why I don't think I have envisioned such a beautiful scene of recent! Appreciated this one a bunch! Fav'n for my sav'n! gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

July 26, 2012 at 5:11 PM

Very creative work..Descriptively written..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

Nette Onclaud

July 26, 2012 at 4:20 PM

dear me, russell... your language touches my heart with this charm of a piece... True love goes on, an energy which finds sweet passion in itself... yowzah!... :) huggs!