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Flapping My Gums

A wise old owl this duffer's become Trying to appear brilliant, flapping my gums At times what comes out Gobbly guk creating doubt Bout the power of my brain or am I just a bum

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/30/2017 2:20:00 PM

No you are a wise person with a humourous outlook. Doesn't do to take anything too seriously.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/30/2017 9:55:00 PM

PS. except love and that is the only thing that is important! You are a loved person Jack, wife, family and we your friends. (almost forgot that bit)

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/30/2017 3:08:00 PM

"Doesn't do to take anything too seriously" Well no problem then!!! Old gigglepuss here!!! xxx

Silent One

Date: 9/30/2017 12:54:00 PM

You are not a bum lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/30/2017 3:06:00 PM

So nice to hear my good friend! How are you this fine day?

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2017 6:34:00 AM

Quite a bit of limericky imagery :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/30/2017 6:55:00 AM

Tricky eh! I'm a master illusionist! LOL xxx