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Flaming Souls

I'm a slave of your naked soul. Breathless, I dance in the fire alone. The flame keeps me burning, as I move around your bed. On top of your world, I see hunger and thirst. I came to feed your satisfaction, deliver your soul in a bliss. Let us dive into devotion, Altogether feel the blaze. In a deepest part of the ocean, hidden the treasure that I own. I offer only with you, In between these thighs, We'll climb the way up to the sky. On the edge whisper my name. And I'll be next to surrender. In your arms I find my heaven. The morning smiles back at me. Dream has gone and back to reality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/28/2014 11:06:00 AM
Very good read...sensual and captivating, especially the second part.//paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/5/2014 3:31:00 PM
Thank you, Paul for a kind visit!! ..=))
Date: 2/21/2014 10:48:00 PM
This is a very passionate and sensual write. Sometimes, love can feel like a dream instead of a reality. You expressed your emotions very well here. Wonderful poem, Aiyah!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/22/2014 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, Kelly...i appreciate your comment so much!!! ..have a great weekend ahead... ^__^ ,,hugs!
Date: 2/21/2014 1:52:00 PM
such passion Aiyah lifts this to exquisite hugs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/22/2014 9:35:00 AM
beautiful Shadow....the youngest nana here in PS...Thank you for the comment! ..be safe and warm this weekend! :)
Date: 2/21/2014 12:37:00 PM
Aiyah an excellent image, it flows well and is romantic with seduction as an inner layer....David
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/22/2014 9:37:00 AM
David...the "King of the Poets" ...thank you for this wonderful comment you left... Hope you have a great weekend! :)

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