Flaming leaves

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flaming leaves braving autumn winds ravishing courage AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on October 8, 2018

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/9/2018 7:41:00 PM

Oh, this haiku is truly awesome in its Autumn beauty, Line. Especially love the last line.. ingenious! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 7:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/9/2018 11:53:00 AM

LOVE this one! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 3:11:00 PM

Thanks, Rhona, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2018 7:50:00 PM

Indeed, there will be a few courageous leaves hanging on as the winds of autumn pick up, Line. Lovely haiku! Like the way you personified the leaves. Hugs, Carolyn

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 8:43:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carolyn. I try to avoid personification in haiku but couldn't help myself with this one.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/8/2018 3:36:00 PM

I like Autumn,...and leaves.. and your poem...!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 8:44:00 PM

Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Quoth.