Flaming leaves

flaming leaves
braving autumn winds
ravishing courage



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

autumnbeautifulcourageredstrengthhaiku

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Susan Ashley

October 9, 2018 at 7:41 PM

Oh, this haiku is truly awesome in its Autumn beauty, Line. Especially love the last line.. ingenious! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier

October 9, 2018 at 7:48 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

Rhona Mcferran

October 9, 2018 at 11:53 AM

LOVE this one! ;)

Line Gauthier

October 9, 2018 at 3:11 PM

Thanks, Rhona, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Carolyn Devonshire

October 8, 2018 at 7:50 PM

Indeed, there will be a few courageous leaves hanging on as the winds of autumn pick up, Line. Lovely haiku! Like the way you personified the leaves. Hugs, Carolyn

Line Gauthier

October 8, 2018 at 8:43 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carolyn. I try to avoid personification in haiku but couldn't help myself with this one.