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Flaming Fire Crackled

flaming fire crackled ranging venom of cruel souls thousands of hope dashed burning ember raised its hands the world united in grief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/22/2012 5:35:00 AM
great write Modupe,smell the smoke lol
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Date: 10/19/2012 11:25:00 PM
Intense and sad, Modupe!
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Date: 10/19/2012 11:18:00 AM
Excellent tanka here Modupe.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 10/19/2012 11:13:00 AM
Very expressive work..I can feel the emotion in this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2012 8:30:00 AM
I share your grief. You've said it all, with so few words.
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