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Flames of Love

My heart is on fire with blazing passion for you 'cause you torched my heart with flames of your love. The spark in your eyes with flickering light full of love winking me, fueling my burning desires for you. My body is scorched by sizzling crave for you while you hold me in your arms with hot embracing love. My heart is on fire with blazing passion for you 'cause you torched my heart with flames of your love. My mind is dazzled by flaring fantasies about you as you kiss me and singe my lips with your searing love. The flash in your smile with melting joy full of love luring me erotically; erupting my love like wildfire for you. My heart is on fire with blazing passion for you 'cause you torched my heart with flames of your love. Date : 10/02/2016 Note : For the Movie Mania - Romance Poetry Contest by Nicola Byrne. *Placed Third* This poem is inspired by the novel and movie Fifty Shades of Grey. This poem is a French form 'Rondel Supreme' consisting of 14 isosyllabic lines Rhyme scheme : ABba abAB abbaAB. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeated lines. There isn't an option of this particular form in this site, which is why I had to place it under rhyme form.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/11/2016 2:05:00 PM

WoW! Afzal, you have penned such a passionate write. It's so sensual and I could feel the longing and desire in each word. This is my kind of poem. Any woman would love for her man to feel this way about her. I loved that movie by the way. It inspired you to write a fantastic poem. A without doubt seven and fave: -) Alexis

Afzal Nusker
Date: 12/11/2016 11:39:00 PM

Thank you for such a generous compliment, Alexis.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/11/2016 2:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Afzal:) I agree with Eve:) I like this new form:)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/11/2016 4:19:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jo.

Augustus Black

Date: 10/7/2016 1:28:00 AM

This write is totally wrapped with good loving emotions. The wording and flow of write is very fantastic. I am looking forward to watch that movie. Really. Nice Poem

Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/7/2016 4:43:00 AM

Thank you, Augustus. I appreciate your encouraging compliment very much.

Darren White

Date: 10/5/2016 12:41:00 AM

I love the intricate rondel. And the film. Congratulations on your third place :)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/5/2016 2:02:00 AM

Thank you very much, Darren.

Tom Arnone

Date: 10/4/2016 10:44:00 PM

Sadly, I've yet to see this film. Your poem certainly exudes the intense eroticism associated with the book and the subsequent movie. Congrats!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/4/2016 10:58:00 PM

Thank you very much, Tom. The novels were a sensation and so is the craze for much awaited movies.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2016 10:36:00 PM

Wow! Very passionate write, I never saw the movie or read the book but this tells it all. Hugs good write

Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/3/2016 1:18:00 AM

Thank you very much, Eve. I suggest that you read the novel which is actually a set of trilogy by E. L. James.