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Flames of Love

My heart is on fire with blazing passion for you
'cause you torched my heart with flames of your love.
The spark in your eyes with flickering light full of love
winking me, fueling my burning desires for you.

My body is scorched by sizzling crave for you
while you hold me in your arms with hot embracing love.
My heart is on fire with blazing passion for you
'cause you torched my heart with flames of your love.

My mind is dazzled by flaring fantasies about you
as you kiss me and singe my lips with your searing love.
The flash in your smile with melting joy full of love
luring me erotically; erupting my love like wildfire for you.
My heart is on fire with blazing passion for you
'cause you torched my heart with flames of your love.


Date : 10/02/2016

Note : For the Movie Mania - Romance Poetry Contest by Nicola Byrne.
          *Placed Third*
This poem is inspired by the novel and movie Fifty Shades of Grey.
This poem is a French form 'Rondel Supreme' consisting of 14 isosyllabic lines
Rhyme scheme : ABba abAB abbaAB. The capital letters are the 
refrains, or repeated lines. 
There isn't an option of this particular form in this site, 
which is why I had to place it under rhyme form.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/11/2016 2:05:00 PM

WoW! Afzal, you have penned such a passionate write. It's so sensual and I could feel the longing and desire in each word. This is my kind of poem. Any woman would love for her man to feel this way about her. I loved that movie by the way. It inspired you to write a fantastic poem. A without doubt seven and fave: -) Alexis

Afzal Nusker
Date: 12/11/2016 11:39:00 PM

Thank you for such a generous compliment, Alexis.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/11/2016 2:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Afzal:) I agree with Eve:) I like this new form:)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/11/2016 4:19:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jo.

Augustus Black

Date: 10/7/2016 1:28:00 AM

This write is totally wrapped with good loving emotions. The wording and flow of write is very fantastic. I am looking forward to watch that movie. Really. Nice Poem

Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/7/2016 4:43:00 AM

Thank you, Augustus. I appreciate your encouraging compliment very much.