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flames leaping circling night lighting dark paths torch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2015 10:09:00 AM
A lovely Lanterne worthy of a high placing, Rhonda. Your torch illuminates! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 5/4/2015 10:42:00 AM
Great winning work..Congrats!!Sara
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Date: 5/3/2015 9:38:00 PM
RHONDA, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/3/2015 7:15:00 PM
This is hot Rhonda :) seriously, nicely written and big congrats!
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Date: 5/3/2015 5:51:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:25:00 PM
Lovely piece,dear friend...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 4/14/2015 10:17:00 AM
discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece....
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:22:00 AM
Excellent subject choice for a lanterne I thought. Great imagery with so few words. Amazing. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/3/2015 10:34:00 AM
True to form, story told. Love it!
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Date: 4/2/2015 9:42:00 PM
this is just wonderful, rhonda. I'm seeing so many great poems for this contest, and yours is right up there by the top!
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Date: 4/2/2015 1:01:00 PM
The flames from your torch make a lovely lantern(e) Rhonda! gl for the contest. // paul
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Date: 4/2/2015 7:48:00 AM
A nice pen...Peter
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Date: 4/1/2015 10:05:00 AM
This is a beauty Rhonda ;) haven't read a Lanterne in forever.. you made me smile today. Hugs Wilma
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:51:00 PM
an illuminating write in more ways than one ... good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/31/2015 3:26:00 PM
I envy those who can write short, beautiful poetry such as this. Beautiful words, strung together in such an elegant manner! Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:08:00 PM
Very nice..I love this form. BG
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Date: 3/31/2015 4:48:00 AM
love the symbolism of the torch, rhonda... a superb piece all the way.. huggs
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