Flames

flames leaping circling night lighting dark paths torch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 10:09 AM
A lovely Lanterne worthy of a high placing, Rhonda. Your torch illuminates! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Kendrick Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Great winning work..Congrats!!Sara
A  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 9:38 PM
RHONDA, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
Mohn Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 7:15 PM
This is hot Rhonda :) seriously, nicely written and big congrats!
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Arowolo Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Lovely piece,dear friend...Congrats on your win...
Makama Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:17 AM
discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece....
Shaw Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 11:22 AM
Excellent subject choice for a lanterne I thought. Great imagery with so few words. Amazing. Hugs, Kimberly
Yvonne Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 10:34 AM
True to form, story told. Love it!
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 9:42 PM
this is just wonderful, rhonda. I'm seeing so many great poems for this contest, and yours is right up there by the top!
Callus Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 1:01 PM
The flames from your torch make a lovely lantern(e) Rhonda! gl for the contest. // paul
Holmes Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 7:48 AM
A nice pen...Peter
Neels Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 10:05 AM
This is a beauty Rhonda ;) haven't read a Lanterne in forever.. you made me smile today. Hugs Wilma
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 5:51 PM
an illuminating write in more ways than one ... good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Hopper Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 3:26 PM
I envy those who can write short, beautiful poetry such as this. Beautiful words, strung together in such an elegant manner! Thanks for sharing!
Gorelick Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Very nice..I love this form. BG
Onclaud Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 4:48 AM
love the symbolism of the torch, rhonda... a superb piece all the way.. huggs
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