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Flameout......Remembering Jim Morrison

Flameout…… remembering Jim Morrison Dreams run into the wind Sending waves crashing into flames rising From the oil burning on the brains of skyscrapers Selling shares of forgotten songs Lost in green pyres of greed the safe shore, just out of sight ……. The safe shore Just Out of sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/17/2010 2:18:00 PM
I like this poem very much, especially its form. Thanks for comments on my poem:)
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:29:00 PM
Jim`s hand. I liked it, James
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Date: 5/17/2010 6:00:00 AM
Very interesting write James. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:34:00 AM
Morrison "flamed out" way too early, Jimbo. Too bac he never reached a safe shore. Enjoyed your poem -- reminded me of one of music's greatest singers. Thank you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:26:00 AM
Very meaningful and deep expression.
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