Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Flamed Rythmn

Mantle of summer, cloaked so bright
Where flowers pose lending their grace.
Along red vines as sun ignites
My carefree notes that twirl, retrace
The gleam of breezes dappling through
On painted strokes with finest hue.

How then can I resist
The gush of wildness’ flow
When come nightfall, hands lift
To reach flamed moon aglow,
Like vignette of night’s show...

And tasting summer’s blaze
Heated sighs I release,
As blossoms now amaze 
With my notes that tease...

One more dance
While hips fling
Of sweet romance;

While through beats
I'm a dizzy

song!



Contest:Who am I? Or, What am I ?
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Ray Dillard February 12, 2016 at 5:37 PM Congrats Nette, on your placement in this contest. Keep up the hard work! RAY

Daniel Turner February 10, 2016 at 5:04 AM Beautiful , Nette. You should've been a poet.! LOL a well deserved high place poem for a special lady. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A February 9, 2016 at 11:51 PM Nette, loving and enjoying this one all over again, thank you for the super XOOL Who AM I Support. A delight and head scratching contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Monterey Sirak November 15, 2014 at 7:16 AM I have missed reading your poems. The images you create are magical. I am in for a very enjoyable morning catching up with you.

Casarah Nance October 28, 2014 at 7:37 AM The third stanza wowed me, its all good, great winner Nette :)

Jason Conley October 27, 2014 at 9:11 AM Oh Nette, this is so good! Congrats!

Olusegun Arowolo October 26, 2014 at 7:28 PM Wonderful and interesting piece,Nette..Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...

Frederic Parker October 25, 2014 at 8:02 PM congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem, I've seen dancing with flames at my sons wedding, his wife is from columbia and the wedding party danced where the women had burning candles in the palms of their hands...

Tim Smith October 25, 2014 at 12:41 PM Great to see this beauty shine...congrats Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans October 25, 2014 at 11:41 AM Dropping back with my congratulations. It's great that you received such high placing. Congratulations Nette

Carrie Richards October 25, 2014 at 10:37 AM The dance of summer, is captivating!! Lovely win, dear Nette! Congrats to you!

Mark Peterson October 25, 2014 at 10:28 AM Certainly, you reign supreme, as the scepter you seize is transformed into a magic wand. Lovely form and graceful rhyme.

Dan Helppi October 25, 2014 at 10:13 AM Congratulations to you! We all win too because we get to read your well written work.

Abdul Malik Mandani October 25, 2014 at 9:51 AM A nearly perfect write! Many congrats.

Sandra Haight October 25, 2014 at 9:23 AM Hi Nette, your poem is so beautiful and so full of imagery. I love the way it also rhymes. Congratulations on your top win! Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 25, 2014 at 7:29 AM Congrats on ur top place on this amazing write Nette! U rock my dear!

Paul Callus October 25, 2014 at 6:00 AM Nette...you whirl and you twirl in a most enchanting dance where imagery spills across these lovely lines. I am entranced! Congratulations on a top podium finish. // paul

Maurice Yvonne October 25, 2014 at 5:54 AM Congratulations on your big win with this jewel embeded write.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 25, 2014 at 5:48 AM A delightful write, nette, congrats on the win

Jan Allison October 25, 2014 at 4:20 AM Absolutely stunning Nette - it left me in a trance! - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx

Kayod5 Kayode October 25, 2014 at 2:57 AM Congrats Nette,truly irresistable like ,'' The gush of wildness’ flow...''

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2014 at 12:46 AM Nette, so many stunning lines in this one, and I loved how you used rhyme as well. A real beauty. Congrats for second place in my contest.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 23, 2014 at 3:11 AM Yes it has brought me a trance. The journey to trance wow!! you can do it without any narcotic. Sooo good. hugs!!!-----rajat

James Fraser October 22, 2014 at 2:39 PM This is beautiful Princess, an absolute delight to read. The imagery is exceptional, and vibrant colours abound amidst the flowers you write about, and the last few lines are dreamy- your liege, James :)

Amelie Mara October 21, 2014 at 1:07 PM "How then can I resist The gush of wildness’ flow"; how can I resist the rapture of this poem? This just takes me away, Nette.

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