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Flame To Inferno

Dormant ashes, coals within,
Tremble as a passing breeze
Sprays cold gray dust across the smoky air

All seems bleak and dead

The breeze strengthens
Ashes swirl and soar
Uncovering embers and simmering coals

Temperatures rise and sparks fly
As the grave of gray rises like a phoenix from its ashes
Flames spiral out of the ground
Its pale gray now radiant with light

A bird of flame unfurls its wings and takes flight
Leaving its ashes behind to settle in the dark

Faster
Higher
Louder

Further the flame grew
Turned a striking shade of red
And frayed the darkness
Revealing perhaps what was not yet meant to be revealed

At the bird's peak, the colors shifted

The phoenix plummeted

Faster
Lower
Silent

An inferno of icy blue
Still burning all in its path

Then there is emptiness

In a dry well of sorrows
Frost melting the stone
The phoenix now shrouded in cold mist
Simmers

Shafts of light escape the cavern of the well
And with a thunderous roar
The stone crumbles and a hawk hurtles upwards

Fire in its eyes
The tips of its wings aflame

Red and Black

Everything burns
Cracks and buckles

Still the hawk hovers
Its gaze crushing and cruel

At whom?

Black and Red

Fire and Ice

My empty, dry well… crumbles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/7/2008 2:05:00 PM
Such a powerful write Mahmood...The sincerity of your poem is very grasping... Take good care friend, Always..Farah
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