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Different dawns
reveal themselves 
and 
near our blue 
world
asteroids becom
one 
with 
the 
sky
Any questions?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Golden Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 5:44 PM
Hmmm...well now that you ask....how do they become one with the sky? And, why is the sky blue? :P
Devonshire Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 8:17 PM
No questions! You painted a brilliant image with your creative pen, Matthew. Great poem! Love, carolyn
Brown Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 11:01 AM
Thank you for sharing this piece Andrew. Thank you for your kind comments. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carol
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September 27, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Yes, what asteroids. Keep writing. Sara
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