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Different dawns reveal themselves and near our blue world asteroids becom one with the sky Any questions?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 5:44:00 PM
Hmmm...well now that you ask....how do they become one with the sky? And, why is the sky blue? :P
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Date: 9/29/2009 8:17:00 PM
No questions! You painted a brilliant image with your creative pen, Matthew. Great poem! Love, carolyn
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Date: 9/28/2009 11:01:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this piece Andrew. Thank you for your kind comments. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2009 12:56:00 PM
Yes, what asteroids. Keep writing. Sara
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