Flaky Romance

Amazed to see 
the flaky romance
of snow with whirling winds……
As if nature is playing
a pillow fight….
With all its might….
Or as if it is showering
flower petals in honour
of his muse…
What an ambiance it has created for his love 
in no time…
The layout so serene
and groovy
Even heaven is looking down with envy
After the tumult is over
The eagerly waiting Sun
comes out to see what has
been created in its absence
The earth appears  sparkling
As if layered with diamonds
Leaving everyone spellbound
With such a startling view…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 6:08 AM
This is very good imagery. Flaky romance has a double meaning that i much enjoyed here as well. I think sun, in its envy,is going to destroy this romance quickly!!
Ali Bhat Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 10:50 AM
thanks Andrea......and ya ,as quickly as possible....hahaha....xx
Hu Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 3:58 AM
true:)nature at its best
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