Flakes of the Rasp

black wings drip white snow
raspy call of an old crow…
crystallized flakes blow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Radke Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 7:15 AM
ps. forgot to rate this poem. sorry... I give you a '7' both for the title and for the middle line of your haiku. Deb
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January 5, 2011 at 7:13 AM
I like this very much. Your title is intriguing; using the words 'flakes' and 'rasp' -- very good. I can see this image, and hear the crow. Enjoyed this haiku. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I appreciate your taking the time to do this. Deb
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