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Flakes of the Rasp

black wings drip white snow raspy call of an old crow… crystallized flakes blow

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Deb Radke

Date: 1/5/2011 7:15:00 AM

ps. forgot to rate this poem. sorry... I give you a '7' both for the title and for the middle line of your haiku. Deb

Deb Radke

Date: 1/5/2011 7:13:00 AM

I like this very much. Your title is intriguing; using the words 'flakes' and 'rasp' -- very good. I can see this image, and hear the crow. Enjoyed this haiku. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I appreciate your taking the time to do this. Deb