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Flakes Dance

flakes dance on glassy shore as jays perch low…  trilling heart-frozen cries



In one line (monoku #9) Contest, PD
3/15/2016

birdsongwintermonoku

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Paul Callus

March 30, 2016 at 2:36 PM

So pleased to be back with congratulations, Nette!! Those heart-frozen cries still echo in my mind! hugs ~ paul

Hansteven Selfa

March 30, 2016 at 9:10 AM

Congratulations Nette on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS

Cecilia Macfarlane

March 29, 2016 at 3:29 PM

Terrific write and win Nette. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

March 29, 2016 at 3:25 AM

Brilliant take nette.. congrats on big win!

Bl Devnath

March 27, 2016 at 12:56 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend with this excellent poem. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

March 27, 2016 at 12:36 PM

Congrats on your win, Nette. A very unique take on the contest.

Vladislav Raven

March 27, 2016 at 11:27 AM

Hi Nette, Happy Easter, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoyed the read, a wonderful Monoku. This work floats so gently into my faves....Vlad.

Tom Quigley

March 27, 2016 at 8:55 AM

This is beautiful!

Probir Gupta

March 27, 2016 at 4:36 AM

Congratulations for the win...

Poet Destroyer A

March 26, 2016 at 11:58 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA