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flakes dance on glassy shore as jays perch low… trilling heart-frozen cries In one line (monoku #9) Contest, PD 3/15/2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2016 2:36:00 PM

So pleased to be back with congratulations, Nette!! Those heart-frozen cries still echo in my mind! hugs ~ paul

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/30/2016 9:10:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/29/2016 3:29:00 PM

Terrific write and win Nette. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/29/2016 3:25:00 AM

Brilliant take nette.. congrats on big win!

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/27/2016 12:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend with this excellent poem. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 12:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nette. A very unique take on the contest.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/27/2016 11:27:00 AM

Hi Nette, Happy Easter, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoyed the read, a wonderful Monoku. This work floats so gently into my faves....Vlad.

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/27/2016 8:55:00 AM

This is beautiful!

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/27/2016 4:36:00 AM

Congratulations for the win...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 11:58:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 3/17/2016 11:50:00 AM

Now that you mention it, Nette, I see flakes, too! Both of us felt heart emotion....yours frozen, mine heavy:) gl in the contest! hugs // paul