Flag- Haiku

standard proudly flown
red white and blue unity
bickering sisters



My Union Jack, United Kingdom
For contest 'Flag Haiku' sponsored by Skat A
July16th 2015

patriotichaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 27, 2015 at 8:44 PM

Viv, Congratulations on your awesome win. every poem has been an honor to read. Love LINDA

Viv Wigley

July 27, 2015 at 9:19 PM

Thanks, Linda, everybody stepped up to the plate on this one, Viv x

Paul Callus

July 25, 2015 at 3:51 PM

Congratulations on this cleverly worded haiku, Viv! Time for those bickering sisters to find an honourable solution! #7 // paul

Viv Wigley

July 26, 2015 at 12:35 AM

Grazzi, Paul, that's my stint as a Political commentator out of the way. Regards, Viv

Andrea Dietrich

July 24, 2015 at 10:49 PM

I LOVE the twist!! Congrats with this gem

Viv Wigley

July 26, 2015 at 12:36 AM

Thank you kindly, Andrea, always love a Haiku. Viv x

Jan Allison

July 24, 2015 at 5:48 PM

Very clever Mr Viv Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

July 26, 2015 at 12:37 AM

Thanks, Jan, sometimes I can be more clever and shrewd than- well, one of those clever shrewd things, that is so clever and shrewd that it.... oh, just shut up, Viv. x