Fixing Flaws

God blesses my soul.
Completely, eternally—
Fixing up my flaws.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
February 22, 2010

Poetic form:  Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:59 AM
Nice cinquain, sweetie!
Loving Iii Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 3:32 PM
the same here. john
Devonshire Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 3:18 PM
From what I've seen, His work with you has been completed, Dane Ann! Great cinquain, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 3:14 PM
nicely penned, yep he is working on me.
Nelson Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 2:13 PM
excellent choice of words, the beauty of haiku, insightful and beautiful
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