Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Fixing a Rainbow With Words

I sat on half a rainbow and dangled my feet...
I think your on the other side, but to far to reach...
Maybe we can cast out some words to close the gap...
My ideas are near like a bag of thoughts sitting on my lap...
But I must choose the right ones to connect our lines...
Any diversion from this theme will leave us stranded in time...
So tender pieces will be built with care for each word to flutter...
And in the end a couplet of smiles will pull this rainbow back together...
Now a string of poems spread out across my sky to yours...
And all my thoughts and love find their way to your doors...

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Diana Mohammed April 29, 2012 at 8:40 PM Wow!!...You are an amazing writer... Gentle words, flowing with deep thoughts...Beautiful..very beautiful...Love Diana

Dinda Minardi April 17, 2012 at 8:37 AM I love this line so much 'And in the end a couplet of smiles will pull this rainbow back together...' Happy birthday, Sweet Poet. Always a pleasure to swim in your words :)

Poet Destroyer A April 15, 2012 at 12:12 AM lol..lots of typos... you...see... i keep going and going and going... without looking back... good night...pd

Poet Destroyer A April 15, 2012 at 12:11 AM Saved, the best for last tonight... now move on over so i can sit with you on that half of rainbow.. and fix a rainbow with your help... This is very nice Michael, i hope all your words reach that door.. everyone knows what's at the end of every rainbow... (( heros)) silly... did you really think i was going to say gold... lol... I'm with you Michael, i'm sending a kite of poems into the sky... in hopes, it finds it's way to that ceratin someone... i fine mighty poem..always..PD

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2012 at 8:11 PM love the dangling feet!!

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2012 at 8:10 PM This is adorable, the whole idea of reaching out to another with a rainbow of words and the cute way you rhymed it. Love it.

Russell Sivey April 14, 2012 at 4:09 PM This is a really fabulous write my friend! I very much like how you put together poetry that will span the clouds to bring smiles that will bring the "rainbow back together..."! I thoroughly enjoyed your write that I have read this evening! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2012 at 11:59 AM ....I sat on the other side and dangling my feet Michael.... Love it !!!! Have a lovely weekend! Like the new blogg.- oxox love Anne-Lise on the other side in Norway. Michael J. Falotico April 14, 2012 at 1:16 PM I will cast out a poetic line to you Ann-Lise!!!

Jared Pickett April 14, 2012 at 10:20 AM WOW.. You have most certainly painted a wonderful tale here my friend. Strong words strung together to create a masterpiece.. Well written, I enjoyed every word, keep up the good work.. It is good to see you again my friend.. It has been a long time!!!...:JP) Michael J. Falotico April 14, 2012 at 1:14 PM Jared my friend your words are so well taken. Thank you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2012 at 9:26 AM magnificent visal with powerful words in rhyme Michael luv.. profound and expressive thoughts uv.. complimenting your excellent blog this day.. we all need reflection now and then.. thankxx for providing luv.. and thankxx for my win .. am so honored u liked it .. hope u have a super day .. for a super guy.. JG in awesome mode.. xoxo.. always and forever ..luv.. Michael J. Falotico April 14, 2012 at 1:17 PM Looking forward to when your a bridge away luv. xox

Broken Butterfly April 14, 2012 at 8:48 AM This is really beautiful Michael with many lovely lines and thanks for my placement in your Passing A Love Note Contest, I am very happy Michael J. Falotico April 14, 2012 at 9:02 AM Thank you Butterfly xox