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Fixed Gaze

Fixed Gaze To capture the distant gaze Of the aged's milky blue eye Is to gaze into eternity. Is it my eye they see Or a distant memory, The tiniest mote, The light of a spark? Fixed upon a place Staring motionlessly, Fearing to miss A glimpse Of who they might be. A feeling of falling Into the vastness of space. No beginning no ending Consciousness lost in place. I swear we connected Within that long stare. The horror of knowing Too soon I'd be there. A milky blue iris Not seeing the world Not seeing me. Fixed gaze, The world staring back At me.

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Vickey Rhymer

Date: 12/13/2022 11:14:00 PM

Have seen those eyes and feared looking into them.In the movie big fish the old woman the kids called a witch said if you looked into her opaque lensed eye you would see your death.The closer I get the less fearful I am or perhaps pragmatic.Fearing life's conclusion does not add an iota of time to it.Really enjoyed Kevin.

Jane Gomm

Date: 7/21/2018 6:48:00 AM

KEVIN,I thought you where writing about a moment of stillness, not fear ? that's how your poem came across to me. when we shut off for a few seconds ?? um Jayne.

Kevin Lawrence

Date: 7/19/2018 11:29:00 AM

Really!?! No one sees the horror of this and needs to express fear? Kev.

Jane Gomm

Date: 7/19/2018 9:25:00 AM

This poem has of a dream like quality Jane Gomm.