Five Winter Haiku Kerouac Pop

seven below zero
      silent angels
cold prayers


darkness falls on snow
      fumbling
for my keys 


metrodome cave-in
      vikings lose their home
pillage detroit town


frost-bit
      mountain climbing
your forgotten love


windblown snow
      covers my tracks
am I here?
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Guzzi Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 5:12 AM
what a wrap up! I bet it feels just like that "Am I here?" who knows aye? Thanks so much for your tyraid of joy on Raven did you listen to the song link? Twa Corbies? Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 2:20 PM
I enjoyed these a lot, James. My fav was the second one. Gosh, I would be fumbling so bad to get inside my car!! LUv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Darling LoL OK I'll take it no one has ever said I look "darling" THANK YOU...frost bitten red nose/ Rudolph's rival shining.../ahhhhh CHOO honk honk snort
Richards Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Wow....these are terrific...in the true sense of haiku poetry. Number two....I love that one !!! (well actually all of them!) :)
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