Sara Kendrick Poet Monoku

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Five Unrelated Lines

 
shared relationship~food and pollination~tiger lily and butterfly  

female democrate~trail blazer in politics~a new president


yellow swallowtail ~butterfly clings to lily~summer drenching rain


          
barn swallows in flight~gracefully catching insects~sing an Italian Opera   


ragged old homeplace ~in process of remodel ~ critters scamper fast                              


My second line is about battle of the sexes in that President of US is usually considered a man's job..

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Funom Makama February 6, 2016 at 8:32 AM your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!

Paul Callus January 31, 2016 at 11:06 AM A lovely set of one-liners, Sara; especially the 3rd and 4th:) ~ Regards // paul [ps...like the new avatar:)] Sara Kendrick January 31, 2016 at 1:11 PM I am glad that you enjoyed the 3rd and 4th ones..They were fun to write..I enjoy seeing and hearing nature and I miss it in the winter when I don't get to go out as much..Sara

Nette Onclaud January 29, 2016 at 10:16 AM enjoyed to the fullest; the 4th is a rocker, sara... yes!.huggs Sara Kendrick January 29, 2016 at 4:36 PM Nette, I enjoyed watching those swallows catching bugs early one morning and enjoyed seeing them and writing those lines..Thanks for stopping by.Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 28, 2016 at 10:40 PM Brilliant take Sara.. sure to do well in contest! Sara Kendrick January 29, 2016 at 4:35 PM Thanks for the encouragement..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2016 at 6:42 PM these were fun to read, Sara. I especially liked the last one Imagining those critters scampering. Sara Kendrick January 29, 2016 at 4:35 PM Thanks for that..The thought came to me after a couple decided to redo the ladies grandparents home for her family to enjoy and there were all kinds of critters in the house..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2016 at 2:24 PM - Very well done, Sara ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick January 29, 2016 at 4:33 PM I wish that I could say of all my life that it was well done..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Laura Leiser January 28, 2016 at 12:02 PM Cleverly written, Sara. Enjoyed your ideas written in this unique form :) Sara Kendrick January 29, 2016 at 4:32 PM I am glad that you enjoyed reading my work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara