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shared relationship~food and pollination~tiger lily and butterfly female democrate~trail blazer in politics~a new president yellow swallowtail ~butterfly clings to lily~summer drenching rain barn swallows in flight~gracefully catching insects~sing an Italian Opera ragged old homeplace ~in process of remodel ~ critters scamper fast
My second line is about battle of the sexes in that President of US is usually considered a man's job..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/6/2016 8:32:00 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
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Date: 1/31/2016 11:06:00 AM
A lovely set of one-liners, Sara; especially the 3rd and 4th:) ~ Regards // paul [ps...like the new avatar:)]
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/31/2016 1:11:00 PM
I am glad that you enjoyed the 3rd and 4th ones..They were fun to write..I enjoy seeing and hearing nature and I miss it in the winter when I don't get to go out as much..Sara
Date: 1/29/2016 10:16:00 AM
enjoyed to the fullest; the 4th is a rocker, sara... yes!.huggs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2016 4:36:00 PM
Nette, I enjoyed watching those swallows catching bugs early one morning and enjoyed seeing them and writing those lines..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
Date: 1/28/2016 10:40:00 PM
Brilliant take Sara.. sure to do well in contest!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2016 4:35:00 PM
Thanks for the encouragement..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara
Date: 1/28/2016 6:42:00 PM
these were fun to read, Sara. I especially liked the last one Imagining those critters scampering.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2016 4:35:00 PM
Thanks for that..The thought came to me after a couple decided to redo the ladies grandparents home for her family to enjoy and there were all kinds of critters in the house..Sara
Date: 1/28/2016 2:24:00 PM
- Very well done, Sara ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2016 4:33:00 PM
I wish that I could say of all my life that it was well done..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Date: 1/28/2016 12:02:00 PM
Cleverly written, Sara. Enjoyed your ideas written in this unique form :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2016 4:32:00 PM
I am glad that you enjoyed reading my work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Book: Shattered Sighs