Five Tomatoes Away

Five Tomatoes Away

Five tomatoes away
from devastation.
The bullies bully me.
They give big breaks to
corporations-While taking
unfair shares from citizens
and cutting down on
pensions and "Social Security".
I have no security!

The Arabs store on
the corner is
selling wine, beer and
cigarettes.
Sending their tax free
money home to
fight against our boys.
His taxes are
deferred, and when
time comes to pay
The business is now
switched into his cousin’s name.

One tomato is two dollars...
so I am five tomatoes away,
and I haven't had a salad today. I
am being raped, while they
are getting breaks.

I get reprimanded
severely, they are always
Shaking my tree.
I said "I have no money"
I am not living here tax free.
The levy goes
into effect on the
thirtieth day, so
I budget sparingly,
and have had no
salad today;

I am five tomatoes
away, from homelessness
and devastation;
I wish I had a break like the big
corporations

One day before
I leave this planet I hope to
find dignity.
And eat a Salad everyday
and live life healthily
never again
having to worry
about being
Five Tomatoes away.

Getting old around
here is horrible;
My senior years
unpleasant....
I paid my dues to the
I.R.S., now they
want another present.

I hope to survive
another day, while
they tax my pension;
And so, I pray....
let me eat
another salad, in spite
of being ....
Five Tomatoes Away!
So yes, I've had no tomatoes,
I've had no tomatoes today.!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/28/2019 7:31:00 AM
I love the way you took a simple idea as tomatoes and salad and turned into a really meaningful and poignant poem! Wishing you all the best! Keep writing! Thank you for sharing your poetry!
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Date: 3/27/2019 5:24:00 AM
beautiful and interesting poem
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Date: 3/27/2019 3:47:00 AM
Just outstanding, Vicki...and so true to life. It's just a crime that some people in the Republican party even want to eliminate our Social Security and the huge tax cut that was given to the wealthiest people in this country has hurt us all.
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Date: 10/6/2010 5:46:00 AM
Vicki this is real raw poetry ... I wont repeat what ive said about format lol but its got legs if you want them to run lol smile love Jayne
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Date: 9/25/2010 4:37:00 PM
I browsed through some of your pages because I spoke with you the other day. I like what I read and I will remember you when I pray.
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Date: 9/23/2010 1:29:00 PM
Thank you for your comments, I feel better now!
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:31:00 AM
It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Vicki. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 12:42:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write today Vicki... awesome piece... enjoyed .. with luv..
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