Five Strangers

Five strangers walked into my dream,
  all male and all different versions
  of my deceased mother

They looked at me one by one,
  with that look—her look,
  that had been gone for so long

The first whispered to the second,
  then the second to the third,
  as the fourth and fifth just shook their heads

I tried to look away, but their presence
  followed, and my eyes were frozen
  in the judgment they proclaimed

My sleep was now haunted by what I once knew,
  a maternal affliction that my memory had cured,
  —returning again to infect my dreams

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2017)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Godwin Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 2:56 AM
Deep and dark dramatic flair, full of revelation and gray hues. Well done ... CayCay
Bennett Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Yes--haunting-- deep in sleep-- pain creeps--
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