Five Seconds

The tiny box of three
Quiet in inconsequence
Cowers to bored night
Theory picket fence

Two fly ice
Chosen expertise and calm
Distress the daily grind
Confused in sweated palm

The faithful forty-nine
Hope and safety fed
Now speak unwitting blank
In bitter contact red

The suffering alive
Peak through bewildered eye
Barred to understand
Such loss in seconds Five
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 2:21 PM
Awesome tribute to Flight 3407, nice write, James
Caliri Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 12:47 PM
It creates the eery sensation in me of a robot telling this story...and I like it!
Rhinem Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Smile~I really like the depth from which this write seems to have come from dear Michele ~Along with the style of its writers chosen words~amid the heart of compassion as I see within Your note below....Smile....my very favorite types of writers actually~those whom look beyond themselves~and are thus always a blessing unto others and the world in which they live!!! "Excellent Write Michele!!!"~"Much Warmth & Blessings To You & All You Love, John!":).
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February 17, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Rest in Peace Flight 3407 victims.
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