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Five Pieces of Tear By La Thanh Tuoi

Falling from heaven a sweetest angel. Forever giving.. a tiny baby to the world you lived. Her first cry you heard made your heart joyful. Forever holding.. Your little princess. Strongest and greatest Caring and loving to her you are so. Forever thinking.. the first man she loves. Far but close you are. Alive heart you gave, feeling none but love. Forever missing.. the brightest Night Star In deepest valley A missing angel Forever loving.. Everlasting farewell. To you, my greatest man Ba Yeu

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2016 6:27:00 PM

T.T.L, I'm just stopping by to enjoy your poem. Have a wonderful day. ** LINDA**

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/21/2015 10:43:00 PM

Hi Thanh, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2015 9:59:00 PM

Thanh Tuoi La, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2015 12:02:00 PM

- Hey Thanh :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 11/17/2015 10:44:00 AM

Thanh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Kenisha Shines

Date: 11/17/2015 9:03:00 AM

very beautiful:) have a great day !